I’ve been writing…honest

Well, I’ve been trying to.  My vampires won’t play nice.  I just have the last sign to write before I get a couple of people to look over it, go *argh*, I rewrite it a bit and then I commit its soul to the ether… 😀

And I’ve been hit by a contemporary romance idea, the first one that’s had legs in ages. My contemporaries are much harder to get right than the sf/fantasy books.  Books with high body counts are much easier to write…though this contemporary may have a few littered through it, hehe.  Something to appease the ghoul in me.

Oooh and soon I’ll be able to reveal my new cover for WEAVING WORDS.  It’s by Anne Caine, so naturally it’s gorgeous 😀

Right, back to my vamps, which now has the title, REIVER, much to my relief.  I didn’t think a title would ever come for this one, lol

Friday Flash Fiction – Unity

Friday Flash Fiction

Unity

Blurb

To save her city, save her people, Alena Petrova Dubov, Imperial Princess of the Rodin must submit to the coronation ritual. All right, she has to admit, it isn’t exactly a tortured rite. After all, what other ruler ascends the throne by enjoying two men bred for her personal pleasure?

Excerpt

It’s 18+ so I’m putting it in after the jump. You have been warned…;-)

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New Release: The Honourable Lady

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Royal officials are vanishing and Evia-ben-Thiak doesn’t intend to be one of them.

As a high-ranking member of the court, she fears for her life. So, she takes the only option open to her. She hides on a boat sailing to her home-island.

However, the boat is not the sanctuary she hoped for. A friend from her childhood, the now-feared sorcerer, Makovik is also onboard. To be seen with him could end her career; have her thrown in the deepest dungeon. But more than that, she finds he has a plan.

And his actions will change her life forever…

And here’s an excerpt:

The Honourable Lady

(c)2008 Kim Knox

“Do you know why I’m hated?” His voice was soft, almost to himself. “Why Silan foams at the mouth whenever my name is mentioned?” His shrewd eyes fixed on me, expecting an answer.

Rumours ran that Kear-al-Makovik practised blood magic, a form forbidden by the Crown and the League of Sorcerers for five centuries. Other tales told of sacrifices, that he butchered animals…babies…women. His estate had become a haven to all the evil in the Islands. But then he thought me ignorant of his true reasons. I could never believe my childhood friend would commit such atrocities, so quietly–carefully–I’d had him investigated.

Makovik had contested, in writing, every decree the emperor had issued. The first minister had recorded them, but the evidence against the emperor he’d burned into so much ash. He had to, to preserve his own skin.

“You question imperial law,” I said.

His eyes narrowed. “And why is that, private secretary to the First Minister?”

I held his dark gaze, showing no fear, even though my heart pounded and my hands grew clammy. “Because it’s wrong.”

He shook his head, and his eyes closed. A heavy sigh escaped him. “Yet you happily work with and within the Court.” Makovik shifted his gaze back to the sea.

I stared with him. I had no way of changing the madness of the emperor and his family. They had all been insane for three generations, a fact acknowledged by all Royal Officials. Yet, we could do nothing. The army and the imperial guard stood as solid supporters of their excesses. The emperor and his brother saw slights behind every glance and whisper. They issued orders, demanding the army crush any imagined resistance or raze some village or town to the ground.

Soldiering had turned into a lucrative profession.

Makovik became a lone voice against their rule. Open voice.

“The Court is a dangerous place. No one who’s a part of it has ever considered themselves happy.”

“Then resign!”

“And be replaced by someone worse?”

“Oh, I was forgetting the high principles of the Lady Evia-ben-Thiak,” he said, his voice thick with sarcasm. “The woman who ordered ten men have their tongues cut out because they were talking on duty–”

“And would you rather have them dead?” My face flushed with an angry heat. I pushed at his shoulder, making him look at me. “Silan could hear them from his room. Whispering, plotting, joining with the voices in his head. He wanted them all decapitated.”

I closed my eyes. Silan’s image burned into my memory.

His heavy frame lurched about his room, eyes rolling, white foam flecking his painted lips. Ranting, he demanded the duty guards were talking, talking about him. He wanted them dead, their heads on pikes, their corpses hung from gibbets in the market square….

“Those ten guards still have a position in the palace, far away from Silan. Their families won’t starve.” I willed down the surge in my blood. “So why are you on this boat?”

“Him.” Makovik jabbed a thumb back to the fat-jowled councillor who lectured his guards by the main mast. The wind-chaser had finished with her fun, and his bright blue robes hung loose over his large body. “Ran Lucian. I’ve a bone to pick with him.”

“What are you going to do?”

Makovik smiled. Sly. Almost wicked. The knot in my stomach tightened. Had he given up on the legal path? “Don’t ask that sort of question, Evia. You might get an answer you don’t like.”

The joy of Orange continues

We had yet another outage for about 5 days and have only just got back on line *sigh*

The Ent sent of his 4 page complaint letter last night, lol.  And guess what’s happening this morning.  Yes, it’s Friday, therefore my ISP seems to be playing silly buggers again.  If I don’t post this weekend you’ll know where  I am…bashing my head against the brick wall that is Orange Tech Support. *grrr*

When Kick-ass-itude goes too far…?

My ereader and I have been making friends with a number of new books. I know, bad me, I should be writing… Anyway, what’s started to bug me is why a strong heroine has to constantly assert how strong and independent she is…to the point where I growl at the screen. *sigh*

I know it’s trendy for heroines to be uber-tough and for the hero to want and admire that trait. But how is he going to live with her as the years roll on when she shows no sign of impulse control or maturity?

One heroine had me switching off the screen, slapping the cover shut and walking away. The hero loved her tough, independent nature – as did his brothers (yes, they went there, lol) – kept on admiring it as she got her best friend, her brother, her work partner killed and herself captured because she had to prove herself. She did this on three separate occasions as she left the hero because she was tough and independent. To me, it just kept on proving she was being a selfish and immature idiot.

Don’t get me wrong, I love strong heroines…but I want maturity. I want them to realise that they’re not strong because they constantly run off by themselves, blithely unconcerned with the danger they’re fully aware is out there. I want inner strength, a bit of self-sacrifice and the heroine not blundering about until she literally hits the next plot point. This would be nice.

So, off on that hunt now… 😉