The week was split between Fury and Current. I’m still writing Current now. If I get though it, Fusion and Frequency, then yes, Hailey Edwards, I can get back to writing Heyerdar. ๐ย I do have 27k to pick from for 6 Sunday though.
Oh and I also got good news in the middle of the week. But I can’t share it yet…
A thin smile touched Heyerdar’s mouth. โMy power comes from the heart of the earth. Remember that.โ He leaned forward his mouth so close to hers she tasted his sweet breath and couldnโt stop the quick hitch in her chest. His voice was just above a raw whisper. โNever offer me anything youโre not willing to lose.โ
Great sexual tension. I can feel the heat from here ๐
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A lot of intensity, particularly with that last line.
Whoa *fans herself* Can I borrow this guy? Great stuff!
Great sexual tension!
Oooh, good stuff. Great last line.
Is that a threat or a promise? Either way, I’ll keep reading. Intense.
very smexy!
Ooh what a sexy six sentences!!
I’m willing to offer him a spot in my man pantry. Top shelf even. ๐
You need to write faster! Or catch temporary amnesia about your EC series until Fury is finished. ๐
Fab six, a raw whisper…oh my! LOVE IT!
OMG! Chills on my arms after reading those six. Can’t stop the quick hitch in my chest. Nice!
Oh yeah. That’s my kinda character! And love how you’ve shown his closeness and her physical reaction. Terrific six!
Such an intense last line
Ooh, intense!
That last line is golden! Great Six
Love the last line!! Whoa baby!!
Oh my goodness. You just made me shiver…
Great last line! She might lose everything!
Gulp! NOw that was enough to make a heart stop. A threat and Promise all in one.
Very tempting.
OOh! Felt the heat when he leaned in, and loved that last line!
Excellent advice! ๐ And excellent teaser.
I really like it…
Great last line!
Raw whispers and a sexy last line! Wonderful six!
I’d be willing to lose a lot for a guy like that. ๐
Oh, I like the “raw whisper”. Verrry yummy six.
The last line gave me chills! Great six!
Ooooo. Something tells me she’s willing to lose a lot!
yummeh.
& Congrats!!!!
Very sexy without any contact! Congrats on your news! I’m sure it’s good. ๐
Ooh *shivers*
Very nice!
Ooh, nice six! Especially that last line.
Absolutely love the last line! Great job!