I sort of took this week off… Read and slobbed mainly 😉
Anyway, here’s my 6 from Fury:
She breathed in the warm, bloodied scent, finding it over the stink of people, of animals that swept around the high palace walls. The stall came closest to keeping the meat raw. Her stomach growled and she could no longer resist. With a few snarling bites and quick swallows the meat-filled wrap was gone.
“No, I wouldn’t trust that mouth of yours anywhere near my dick.”
Ava almost choked on the last crumbs of bread still in her mouth.
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Sweet Six!
Happy Sunday,
Kristin Wolfgang
Well, my stomach doesn’t growl with raw meat, but you show her intensity very well. Love how the last two lines change the tone.
Nice six, great descriptive! Love his comment!
I didn’t know where this was going. It surprised me with the laugh! lol!
Loved it, made me laugh
Surprised me too. Nice twist.
Great twist at the end! Got me to chuckle out loud. Nicely done!
LOL! That’s awesome.
That is a great last line and the description before it was fantastic.
Oh, that was laugh out loud funny. Glad I was drinking anything otherwise my computer would have been toast.
Fantastic six, and the last line killed me, I laughed out loud. Thank you.
LOL! I don’t blame him!
Funny and sexy! I love it.
Can’t say I blame him!
LOL, I think this one needs a warning before we read — do not read with coffee in mouth.
LMAO! That’s a hoot!
LMAO…love his comment and her choking on the meat with said comment. Fab, fun six! hehe
Wonderfully intense description and then perfectly timed humor. Nicely done!
Lol! That’s indeed a comment that would make a woman choke! Good one
Love his comment. Great job
LOL! I guess he wants to see her softer side.
A hook and punch. Snappy, snappy writing. Five stars.
Ha, yup I don’t blame her for choking after hearing that!
Love how visceral the first four are, then the last two – ha!
Bwa ha ha! You enjoy your meat a little much and suddenly peeps are looking at you funny. *shakes head*
Well I couldn’t have guessed that was going to happen! Nice six 🙂
And you know, he really shouldn’t with that kind of intro. 🙂
~Xakara
A Way To A Dragon’s Heart 6SS
LOL…Nice six!
Also surprised me. Was thinking vamp or other monster, and it turned out to be a wrap! And his comment was killer!
Loved his comment. Great six
Some girls just know how to eat. Great six!
Uh?! Great six, I wanna read more!
Hehe! I love that last line.
LOL!