I’m plodding along with Fusion…and got distracted yesterday by an evil contemporary. I do not write contemps. No. Not anymore… 😕
Anyway, here’s a bit of Fury:
“What?”
“Bruises.” She bit out the word and held his gaze, saw the memory flicker there.
His hand eased but he didn’t let go. He pulled her behind him. “I’m not used to women with so little stamina.”
Says so much in so little. Good job!
Intriguing six indeed, not enough stamina..I want to know more!
I so hope he’s trying to protect her from something that might bruise her even worse than he has!
Yeah, definitely very curious about what type of woman he normally deals with.
*snort* I’m definitely keeping an eye on this hero.
And I think the contemporary thing is catching. You should start using antibacterial gel before writing. 😉
The part about, “saw the memory flicker there” is very intriguing.
OK, now I need to know just what kind of woman he’s used to. 🙂
Interesting six.
Oh! very interesting!! I want to know more :)!
Wow – that was harsh, rough isn’t for everyone.
I like the tension.
That’s harsh. Great tension between them tho’.
Ouch! He doesn’t hold the punches, does he? 🙂
This was awesome!
So what did he do to her to put bruises on her? I have to find out more so I’ll be back.
Was that a dig at her ego? Okay, I want the next six.
Whoa! What kind of women is he used to? lol! Very intriguing!