As I plot out the three remaining stories in the Planetary Bodies series -: Current, Fusion and Frequency, I’m playing about with an erotic fantasy romance with the working title of Fury.
As I type this I have about 14k written. Hope to have a lot more when Sunday rolls around. Anyway, here’s my six:
Sunlight gilded his muscled body.
Ava dropped her head into her hands and leaned heavily on the balustrade. In the silence, the cool air carried the turn of his bare feet over the sand of the arena, the soft huffs of his breath as his supple body flowed through the series of twisting, intricate moves. The marble dug into her bony elbows and she ignored the pain for her illicit moment of man-watching.
Captain Nahum Heyerdar put on his naked show every morning, just as the sun crept over the second watch tower. Welcoming the fire of the sun as she touched the earth.
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43 thoughts on “Six Sentence Sunday: Fury”
Oh i wish I had such a view from my balcony. Unfortunately, all I have is some old village woman on the way to the baker’s
…she ignored the pain for her illicit moment of man-watching. -Great line. Can’t wait to read more!
“Illicit man-watching” Yes, I think this heroine and I will be great friends. 😀
What a way to start the day! Great six 🙂
Wow…if you don’t write this whole story, I’ll be so sad!
wow! I did the *gulp* thing as I read!! Super 6!
Nice opening. And um, nice view.
Nice way to start a morning! Wonder if he knows she’s there…
Great six. Thanks for sharing.
illicit moment of man-watching — nice pass time! LOL
I expect the sight of Captain Nahum Heyerdar, naked, first thing in the morning, was a glorious thing to see. LOVE THIS SIX! Your descriptions are awesome.
Hmm, I’d get up to watch that as well, heh 😀
I’d withstand way more than marble on bony elbows for that! Great six.
Definitely worth waking up for. :o)
I enjoyed the detail in your sentences, which I usually don’t. I’m a straight forward gal, but when the scene merits it, I love to be deeply immersed, and you’ve done that to perfection here. Great job.
I’d give up sleep and get up a bit earlier for that. Awesome six!
Very interesting. Nice six.
Now that sounds like I show I would ignore some discomfort for as well!
WOW a show every morning, who would want to miss out on that!
Ohh I like it…..
Hmm, would love to be the one doing the man-watching – your description makes him sound scrumptious. Good six!
Nothing like a little voyeurism first thing in the morning…
Mm, great way to start a morning!
Great scene. I have one similar with the guy working out and the gal sneaking a peek. It’s a wonderful, innocent way to introduce lust from the gal. Good job.
Oooooh, I’m so into this.
Oh, gosh. You totally had me at his gilded body. But then I thought she was getting ready to throw her head over the balustrade at him! I must need more coffee! Terrific opening.
I’d get up early for that show too. 🙂 Excellent description.
Mmm… delicious! Nice six 🙂
Sounds like a nice morning view to me!
I’d watch!! Great six.
Definitely want to know more! Felt like I was standing there with her!
Wish I was there, watching too. 🙂
Oh my! I bet I’d be watching, too.
I want to go to the naked show!!
You had me at ‘Sunlight gilded his muscle body.’ Hot! Hot! Hot!
I want in on that show too!
Better than morning coffee!!!
‘ man watching’ my kind of fun! Great six
Sounds like a great view! 🙂
I’d watch that every morning too. 🙂 Great six!
Like the line “illicit moment of man-watching.” The question is, does he know she’s watching? 😀
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