And yet more from Messrs Rider and Sutton:
“Are you strong enough to make me stop, lieutenant?”
“What kind of fucked up—”
Rider cupped his balls and Sutton froze. The hot spike of lust caught him and he couldn’t breathe. Clever fingers teased him to new levels of need.
“Maybe there is something still fucked up in my brain, but I know I want someone to make me end this.” Rider’s breath brushed his lips and his whisper was raw and hot. “Are you him?”
18 thoughts on “Six Sentence Sunday: Bitter Harvest ~ part three”
Well? We’re waiting for an answer! *snicker*
I’m still licking my lips from that post. It was very succulent.
The one thing I would suggest is that “The hot spike of lust” sounds like it’s talking about something specific, or there’s only one time they get to feel lust. Otherwise it should be “A hot spike of lust.”
Great Six, and I’d love to see the whole story.
Love the bold move by Rider and the challenge in his question. The tension in this scene is as tight as a clockspring.
Holy smokes! Piping hot snippet!
Very sexy! 🙂
Oh, they are smokin’! Can’t wait to read the whole thing!
I froze right alongside Sutton. Yowza! Hot!
Yummmm, I love this. Nothing like hot lusty guys in the morning.
Ooohh Sutton and Rider, I love you
Whoa! It is now cold shower time for Lisa! Thank you Kim.
Great tension. Great six.
*Fans self* Great six!
Choking on morning Monster… Holy cow, that doesn’t sound right at all does it. I meant the drink, of course. ::wink::
Great six, Kim. It woke me right up!
The tension between these two sets off sparks!
A steaming, hot excerpt! 🙂
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