I forgot to mention last week that Bitter Harvest was my first try at man love 🙂 <–is very nervous. So here’s a bit more…and this week you get names!
One taste. Just one.
He threaded his fingers through Rider’s hair and the man hissed, his mouth parting. Sutton fisted his fingers. His prisoner groaned, the sound hitting his gut and he wanted, he swallowed, he wanted that sarcastic mouth, to take it and stop the flow of words that had his skin on fire.
Rider’s eyes defied him. “Scared?”
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ooo wowza, hope he gets what he wants. Sounds like he’s going to! NAILED IT xx
Wow, that’s steamy! Nice one! 🙂
Oooo, very nice. I like that. *grins*
very hot!
That tension was smokin hot. Nice!
I’d say you have nailed the ‘man love’ excerpt. lol
Great job.
HOT! You are doing a fantastic job!
MMmm hmmmm keep going….
Is it on in here or what? Great 6!
*le sigh* So delicious. Stop worrying, Kim. You’re going to nail this. 😉
Hot!!! 🙂
Great tension. Very hot. That he’s conflicted only adds to it.
Wow. That had all kinds of tension
fantastic word choices. The attraction, tension, is lovely.
Just one taste can’t be bad, right? Awesome snippet!
I don’t think you have anything to be nervous about!
Wow! That tension is scorching!
Holy HOT!!! Um…wow…like…ahhh…yes, very hot!!!
*cough* I think you have it down.
Full of tension and oh-my-that’s-hot!
I love ..’He wanted, he swallowed, he wanted’ So powerful!
This is a great excerpt! He really wants it. Hope he gets it.