And still with the lurgy this week, so Fury has hardly moved. Here’s a 6 from my biopunk I was playing with earlier in the week…when I should have been writing Fury. Bad me..
Sarah sighed against his neck, hot but pliant. He needed her to be…human as one of the masked keepers aimed a scanner at them. The heat of the beams cut over his face and he shut his eyes against it. Only for a moment. He had to watch. Had to be ready.
As always you can find more sixes here.
15 thoughts on “Six Sentence Sunday: Biopunk”
Thrilling–want to read more!
Ooo, an ominous six! 🙂
Kim…as always AWESOME! Can’t wait to get my paws on this one! hehe.
Hope you feel better. *hugs*
What’s coming? What does he need to be ready for? Love the rising suspense and tension. More, please!
Like this six….powerful. Nicely done 🙂
Sarah sighed against his neck, hot but pliant. ?
This is from the male POV so the use of the word “but” confused me. If you are world building a place where “hot and pliant” is a bad thing you have done a really great job.
Definitely has piqued my interest.
Oh, love that first sentence. And I agree with everyone else, intriguing!
Lots of unanswered questions on this…I’m definitely intrigued! Great six!
Hmmm, tense. Raises many questions, definitely leaves me wanting to know more. Can’t wait to read the details! Excellent excerpt!
I’m hooked. Not really sure what your are setting up but I want to found out more.
Yep, more please!
I agree. So intriguing! 🙂
Ooh, intriguing! I want more.
Comments are closed.