Yep, Once a Thief has a new title, DARK DEALINGS.
I’m into the final push of the line edit on this. Yay 🙂
Heyerdar manhandled the servant through the doors and gave him a light push. The man stumbled, flailed and caught himself. “The answer to that is ‘Yes, he is, Captain Heyerdar.’”
“You enjoyed that,” Ava muttered.
Heyerdar grunted. “Civil servants annoy me.”
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Blunt and effective. Apparently, Capt. Heyerdar adheres to the edict: Show, don’t tell.
Great six, Kim, and I like the new title.
Amusing re civil servants! Enjoyed this six!
Ooooh, I like the new title.
His dialogue serves both to lighten the mood and make him more relatable, lol. Great job!
*giggle* They annoy me too!
Amusing about the civil servants–sometimes they annoy me, too! Nice six. I like the new title, too.
Beautifully sharp. Great six!