Wip#2 is almost complete – I hope to have the first draft out by Monday/Tuesday – so here’s my Sunday Six from that this week 🙂
Thorne was Director of Operations. He probably knew more about her life than she did. “You tell me.”
“So you believe I observed your every move?” He paused and there was a stillness to him that forced her pulse to jump. “That I know exactly when and where and who fucked my wife?”
Oh that is some serious tension! Love it!
He sounds angry. I want more.
Snap. That can’t be good.
Uh oh. Trouble.
Uh-oh. That doesn’t sound good.
and then…. ah come on…..????
Cliffhangers are good…let’s the imagination run wild
Oh damn…what happens next???????