So I’m dutifully typing out chapter three of Bone Magician… and enjoying how annoying Jarod can be, LOL and it hits me. Out of nowhere.
Alchemy needs a prologue. A ‘how the two main characters met under dire circumstances’ prologue.
I am so becoming the prologue queen *sigh*, but Varo doesn’t pop up until the end of chapter three. I think the reader needs to see him in action and that would help with Alesh’s motivation… and her general obsession, hehe