Yep, Once a Thief has a new title, DARK DEALINGS.
I’m into the final push of the line edit on this. Yay 
Heyerdar manhandled the servant through the doors and gave him a light push. The man stumbled, flailed and caught himself. “The answer to that is ‘Yes, he is, Captain Heyerdar.’”
“You enjoyed that,” Ava muttered.
Heyerdar grunted. “Civil servants annoy me.”
As always, you can find more sixes here.
Alix Cameron
/ Sunday, 6 May, 2012Beautifully sharp. Great six!
Melisse Aires
/ Sunday, 6 May, 2012Amusing about the civil servants–sometimes they annoy me, too! Nice six. I like the new title, too.
deecarney
/ Sunday, 6 May, 2012*giggle* They annoy me too!
Vivien Dean
/ Sunday, 6 May, 2012His dialogue serves both to lighten the mood and make him more relatable, lol. Great job!
Sidney Bristol (@Sidney_Bristol)
/ Sunday, 6 May, 2012Ooooh, I like the new title.
veronicascott
/ Sunday, 6 May, 2012Amusing re civil servants! Enjoyed this six!
Babette James
/ Sunday, 6 May, 2012Great six, Kim, and I like the new title.
Monica Enderle Pierce
/ Monday, 7 May, 2012Blunt and effective. Apparently, Capt. Heyerdar adheres to the edict: Show, don’t tell.